[he remembers training with swords when he was with Bruce, and in Titans Tower. he remembers how he and Gar used to go at it like maniacs, always trying to one up each other. his feverish brain is definitely drawing too many emotional connections there, because he has to lift his hands to press the heels of his palms into his eyes to keep from tearing up.]
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Date: 2022-05-09 08:58 pm (UTC)[he remembers training with swords when he was with Bruce, and in Titans Tower. he remembers how he and Gar used to go at it like maniacs, always trying to one up each other. his feverish brain is definitely drawing too many emotional connections there, because he has to lift his hands to press the heels of his palms into his eyes to keep from tearing up.]
Second one sounds better.